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Post by Angat on Wed Sep 11, 2013 2:34 am

Well guys it's been a long time, but since I had to come back to GFXing for a couple of friends and their site, I decided to give myself a few time to make something and show it and see if I still got it, so please I want the full critism you can give me, since I am looking for improvements. Ow and since I forgot some of the stuff, I want to say that there may be some mistakes in my style, but I shall delete them very soon Wink


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Post by Marco.awesome on Wed Sep 11, 2013 8:05 am

Ur style is unique...I think it needs more sharpening, Keep It Up Very Happy +1!


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Post by Shivam on Wed Sep 11, 2013 8:41 am

Needs blending, Flow and a bit better BG. Text needs better placement and colour. Overall it looks lifeless

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Post by Marco.awesome on Wed Sep 11, 2013 9:04 am

Let me tell u something I learnt, flow can be easily earned by sharpening the Render a little bit, and a bit more sharpening on the face, it gains focus right away Smile

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Post by Shivam on Wed Sep 11, 2013 9:56 am

When you add text, use colour from render, don't put it too far from render and NEVER place it near corners. Don't just make everything except render colourless, use more colours. That'll help with blending.

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Post by -|Mark975|- on Wed Sep 11, 2013 12:12 pm

Everyone's pretty much said it, I think the render should stand out more and not be so blended in with the background, text could have a better placement and be more colourful (not too much but enough for people to see it).

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Post by Keiin on Wed Sep 11, 2013 3:02 pm

BWAHAHAHAHA
Its good. +1

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Post by G Man on Wed Sep 11, 2013 3:09 pm

I have a problem with the style of your signatures, they all lack colors and the text is the only thing in color.
Yeah it's cool to make 1-2 sigs like that once in a while, but it seems like you don't even know how to work with colors.
Anyway, it's pretty meh, render doesn't fit well in the BG and the text doesn't fit in well too.
Keep trying m8.

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Re: Just promise not to laugh at me.

Post by Angat on Wed Sep 11, 2013 4:26 pm

@Marco
Thanks, I did sharpen alittle, but didnt want to sharp it too much.

@Shivam
Dude my style is based on almost Black and White and the text is the only colored thing, so that it can stand out. I stuck it there, because there wasnt enough space, because of the render. Also I tried to make the focus on his right arm, like he is concentrating chakra there, but I don't know why it didnt work.

@Mark
Not blended in the background, thats the whole point of putting a background, instead of just filling it with effects, like you're style, which is pretty much diffrent than my style.

@Keiin
Tnx

@G
I really aint that good colors, why do you think I choose such a style. Well 1-2 sigs a week is enough for me, since either way I don't have much time, so its good for me.

@Everyone
As I already mentioned I am trying to improve myself, I like you're critism, it halped me realize my mistakes, but you didn't help me much guys, because I don't want to be adding more colors to my sigs, but I have always been a sketch type and always will be. Thank you once again.

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Post by Marco.awesome on Wed Sep 11, 2013 6:43 pm

I think ur style is unique, thats y I didn't say anything about the colors Smile

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Post by Angat on Wed Sep 11, 2013 7:20 pm

Thank you.

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