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My 2nd try using brushes

Post by Shivam on Sat Feb 16, 2013 4:51 am

As the title said, It's my 2nd try using brushes so I'm look for good C&Cs


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Post by Keiin on Sat Feb 16, 2013 6:36 am

Tooo tired to comment properly but looks better likes the best of all yours

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Post by Chikido on Sat Feb 16, 2013 6:40 am

Well, the sign is messy somehow with those dark & light C4D (or brushes or whatever), you need to make the render focal more bud, that C4D position is not bad but if it stand "alone" like that will make the sign weird..Add some in the border, corner (but not too much, try to make it cover the bg a bit and make the focal point ... focal) here's my opinion: make the focal point lighter than the border or corner, people prefer the light you know...the one you enter SOTW is better cuz the bg around render is lighter and people will be attracted to it (well, i guess)....that is the point i want to say Very Happy about the txt, make it visible, easy to read, cool if you can, and it will be better Smile
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Post by Zenesis on Sat Feb 16, 2013 7:18 am

look good but c4d position look quite messy, render position just great(in middle),i prefer you use 1 pixel for border (it depend on sig size),render face to bright =_= not just face and text position just ok(nothing more to say bcuz Chikido already say it =_=)

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Re: My 2nd try using brushes

Post by Keiin on Sat Feb 16, 2013 9:28 am

Chikidork already said it all.

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Re: My 2nd try using brushes

Post by Shivam on Sat Feb 16, 2013 4:24 pm

Thanks for the comments.
+1 to chiki Very Happy

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Post by Uchiha Madara on Sun Feb 17, 2013 1:08 am

Nice improvement!

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